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Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Love at First Sight Part 1

I promised you guys an excerpt. Here it is. Keep in mind this is super rough draft keeping in the spirit of NaNo. It needs to be fleshed out and read over but anyhow, have a read:


                “Excuse me, miss?” The young women turned, her emerald green eyes pierced the young soldier’s soul.

                “Yes?” she replied shyly, twirling her dark hair between the delicate fingers of her right hand.

                “Your dance card wouldn’t happen to be full, would it?” He took off his hand ran a hand over his freshly shaved head.

“Well,” she smiled sweetly, “I think I’ve got space for just one more.” She winked subtly at him.

                “if you would do me the honour, I would adore to have a dance with you.” He held his strong hand out and bowed his head.

                She waited a moment, made him doubt himself, and looked him over in his crisp, new, uniform.  Finally, she placed her hand in his and he led her to the center of the dance floor.

                The band began to play a fast tune. The young soldier felt quite at home twirling and spinning his partner in intricate patterns never missing a step.

                The young woman, her black and white dress flailing, couldn’t stop smiling. She was overwhelmed by this young man and his surprising abilities. Then their eyes happened to meet; sparks flew. It was not only them who felt it either; everyone in the room could feel the electricity building between them.

                The music stopped. They came to face each other standing still. Each of their chests rose and fell rapidly and their faces were red and shone with a thin layer of sweat. Their eyes met again and they smiled.

                “Would you like to go sit out on the veranda with me and cool off a little bit?” He offered through laboured breaths.

                “Yes.” She caught her breath. “I’d like that very much.

                The young couple walked hand in hand out into the moonlight

                “Evelyn.”

                “Stanley.” You could hear them whisper before they stepped out into the moonlight.
 
 
Part 2 will be a series of letters exchanged between Evelyn and Stanley, stay tuned.
 
Jerr

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