Wrote this like 3 weeks ago and totally forgot to upload it! My bad!
Watching, Waiting, Searching, Falling
June 2013
Brushing lightly
Against your
Arm, did you
Feel me
Lightly brushing?
Watching secretly
Until you
See me too.
Are you
Secretly watching?
Waiting patiently,
Thinking you
Are feeling
It too,
Patiently waiting.
Searching deeply
In your eyes,
For something
That’s more.
Deeply searching
Falling slowly,
Hoping you’ll
Be there to
Catch me.
Slowly falling.
I like this one the best of the lot! I'm just a bit of a composition junkie. The mirroring of the first and last lines of the stanzas makes me happy.
ReplyDeleteStill waiting for a little less patience and a little more action, though. :P
Yeah! I'm always trying to think of cool ways to write such as this mirroring. I have a few other ideas that I've been trying to work out; the words just haven't some to me yet. One is actually stolen from a guy who came to my high school and did spoken word. I just haven't been able to master it yet. when I do I will let you know :P
Deleteyou'll be waiting a while :P
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